Friday, October 20, 2017

Miss Journee

Compellation Miss Journee
It is me again
Your yeezys bring all the fame
Our class room 1 liked you

All you need is that run
At least you didn't advise me about a pun 
I was told to make this respectful
I should have made you whip nae nae 

You were always humble 
You were always up for a cachinnate 
God could've said it was your fate
I don't know what else to say?

We had so much fun
You were very gay but in a happy way 
Well this is the deadline of the rhyme 
Did you ever like slime?
-Jacob

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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 25, 2017 at 10:28 AM

    How do i do da like ting

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  2. AnonymousOctober 25, 2017 at 10:30 AM

    Btw dat maw like k?

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    1. Mr AdamsOctober 25, 2017 at 4:06 PM

      Luke please remember the following...

      To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
      1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
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  3. Mr AdamsOctober 25, 2017 at 4:05 PM

    Fantastic writing Jacob, really great use of the ABAB rhyme schemes.

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  4. Miss JourneeNovember 1, 2017 at 8:55 PM

    Hi Jacob,
    thanks for the poem! I will leave the puns to you for now! Now I know what Yeezys are. Hope the start of the term has gone well for you!

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